The Official Writing Challenge
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10/10/05
Beautifully written!
Very well done. Well written. The message would ring in many women's hearts.
10/12/05
This is a beautifully-written retelling of the story of David and Bathsheba. You definitely have a gift for storytelling.
My entry started out as a modern-day David and Bathsheba but then I gave up when I found it too hard. I'm glad I did because I could never have handled it as beautifully and realistically as you have done. This was excellent. Keep writing!
10/13/05
It took me a while to catch on which King and which woman! Beautifully written, the loss of her child and the need to be forgiven by her husband - wonderfully written.
10/17/05
Oh, nicely done, Amy! This is excellent! I really enjoyed your storytelling and making this well known event so real.
10/17/05
Amy, Congratulations on your Highly Commended Award in the Level 2 Challenge. This was quite an "out of the box" take on the topic, so well done. With love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)