The Official Writing Challenge
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03/12/11
Beautiful! I love the symphony description, I'll have to try and remember that next time I can't sleep!

This brought back memories of looking at the clock and feeling the exact same frustration when in labour (the opposite of time flying whilst having fun!).
Awe, such a sweet story.
You did a good job with the descriptions and really showed how time sometimes flies by and other times it seems to creep.
03/14/11
I loved this. I have been both the one giving birth and the grandmother watching the clock waiting for the birth. Thanks for sharing. God bless!
Nice story! I didn’t know where you were going until the end. I especially enjoyed the instant transition from sleeplessness to being awakened. Very realisitic.
Lovely descriptions in this story of yours.
Enjoyable read with a lovely ending:)