The Official Writing Challenge
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03/12/11
This is very powerful and is a strong reminder to 'spend' time with our kids. I feel this is easy to read and had a good pace to it, I wanted to keep reading. I'm so pleased it ended with reconcilliation, too.
Far too often parents don't realize hew ignoring a child can lead to devastating results. Beautiful poem.
Good job! I appreciated the thought behind this, as well as the verse at the end. Well written!
03/16/11
Excellent poem. I'm glad the MC realized all the opportunities he was missing, bonding with his son.
03/17/11
well done! i missed this the first time but i can see that it is a winner
I agree with an earlier comment - this is powerful stuff! It never ceases to amaze me that 26 letters in an alphabet can be arranged skillfully to change a person's thinking, heart - life!

Thank you for using the gift God gave you for His glory!