The Official Writing Challenge
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03/11/11
Delightful. As I read, my mind raced forward to predict the ending. But you surprised me with an uplifting and pleasurable one, instead. Very well done. Thank you.
03/11/11
I too was surprised at the ending. I love how you wove the theme in. Great job.
03/12/11
Oooh, I almost stopped reading when I thought it was going to be sad - I'm so very glad I kept reading! Thank you for writing a happy ending, what a lovely surprise to a wonderful story.
Nice job, I didn't see the twist coming at all. This is well- written with a surprise happy ending!
03/14/11
Wonderfully written and a very moving story. Thanks for sharing. God bless!
Congratulations for placing 7th in level 2!