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wow!!!!! gripping indeed and there have been genuine cases like this too! I am so glad he came back from the brink of death..... and had his life transformed
This is great. You had me on pins and needles right up until the end. I was hoping he'd have another chance. Wish everybody could.
This story kept my attention and had a satisfying ending. The message is one everyone needs to hear. Well done.
Such a chilling tale up until the end. I am glad he had the second chance, so many are denied. Great descriptions and message.
Very well written - riveting tale! Good job! God bless!
Great story - akin to C. S. Lewis' Screwtape Letters. It gave me goosebumps! And what an encouragement for us to keep praying!
excellent read. Loved the way you played it out and the dialogue between your different characters.
tense until the end:)
Well done this is good writing.