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03/10/11
wow!!!!! gripping indeed and there have been genuine cases like this too! I am so glad he came back from the brink of death..... and had his life transformed
03/11/11
This is great. You had me on pins and needles right up until the end. I was hoping he'd have another chance. Wish everybody could.
03/12/11
This story kept my attention and had a satisfying ending. The message is one everyone needs to hear. Well done.
03/13/11
Such a chilling tale up until the end. I am glad he had the second chance, so many are denied. Great descriptions and message.
03/13/11
Very well written - riveting tale! Good job! God bless!
03/14/11
Great story - akin to C. S. Lewis' Screwtape Letters. It gave me goosebumps! And what an encouragement for us to keep praying!
03/15/11
excellent read. Loved the way you played it out and the dialogue between your different characters.
tense until the end:)
Well done this is good writing.