The Official Writing Challenge
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Excellent writing! Very well written and thought provoking to say the least. His perspective is unfortunately all too common. Good job!
03/04/11
I liked the contrasts here. Nice showing without too much telling. Well done.
Amen for the title and you covered everything nicely. I enjoyed your story so much. Short, percise and right on point. Good job and keep writing.
Very good story to illustrate your verse. It fits this topic well.
Could be an excerpt from a lengthy story with much potential. You told it well. There was several places where commas would have been appropriate but all in all, nicely done.
03/08/11
Nicely written on a topic all too common. Great job!
03/09/11
I hope Glenn will someday see the error of his ways and go the church with his wife. Unfortunatley, this often is not the case.

Good insight and story.
Congratulations for placing 6th in level two!
03/16/11
well done for 6th slot!!!! you had to wait a while to find out but well deserved on the top slots board