The Official Writing Challenge
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03/03/11
The last part sums it up quite well...anything that steals us away from God and family no matter how innocent it seems! My husband too is an online chess player, but nothing, NOTHING like your MC. Thank God! Be careful of your punctuations, we all have that problem at times. Keep writing and God bless!
03/05/11
It's amazing how addicting these things can be. And I agree - that last sentence covers it all. Great reminder.
03/06/11
I simply loved your story. It kind of smacked me between the eyes because at times I put mundane things in my life between God and family. Good job and keep writing.
03/10/11
Very important topic! I remember when PacMan first came out, a good friend used to go to 7-11 every night for hours to play it. Eventually, she, too, realized it was becoming all-consuming and quit. But it's amazing how easy it is to "hook" you! Congratulations! :)
03/14/11
Congratulations on your 3rd place win. It is so easy to addicted to tv, radio, computer, etc. I am glad you highlighted this growing problem.