The Official Writing Challenge
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03/03/11
Just love the grandma stories. Good job on this one. God bless!
03/03/11
Touching story about care giving that can be time consuming, but so worth it in the end. Thanks for sharing and blessings.
03/04/11
being a carer is certainly time consuming and a good one for the theme. You describe the elderly people well but i did not get the flavor of Jake in the same way. I wondered how old he was and what he looked like and so would have loved to have a little more description of him.
I so enjoyed your story. It was heart warming and so touching. Good job and keep writing.
03/09/11
I really liked the dialogue between the two characters. The line about hearing more than she meant to tell was especially good.