The Official Writing Challenge
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Nice job! Excellent portrayal of the horrors of war and how our lives are sometimes hanging by a thread. Also a good example of how seconds count and sometimes how those little things that hold us up aren't always bad. Keep writing.
03/03/11
Great depiction of the reality of war. Good writing. God bless!
03/03/11
Good descriptions, good characters, nice voices, and very real. Good job. Blessings.
03/04/11
dramatic writing about a dramatic and gripping subject. i was right there with you .... and not wanting to be! you portray the hurry and the drama well.
Beautifully written about the horrors of war and the split seconds between life and death decisions. Good job and keep writing
03/07/11
I usually stop reading war stories as soon as I am aware that is the plot. Your story drew me right in and I was held captive. God job!
03/07/11
Gripping tale about the attrocities of war. It is no wonder so many soldiers suffer from PTSD after serving in the military.

I liked how you ended the piece. Excellent job. Keep it up.