The Official Writing Challenge
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02/24/11
Well, that ending took me completely by surprise. LOL Well done, oh mighty writing warrior! Loved it!
I absolutely loved this. I was truly drawn into the story and was anticpating the end, but your ending was a total surprise. I laughed and loved the ending. You have a beautiful sense of humor. Thank you and God bless.
02/25/11
great descriptive prose here and a wonderfully vivid description of a centurion.
03/01/11
I love the way you think. Your illustrated battle was very entertaining (especially when I read the last paragraph). I have used ministering angels many times too.