The Official Writing Challenge
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02/25/11
quite fast moving and a clever way to explore the subject. the tale of the 1900s was interesting and informative, i did not get a real feel for the characters in the story the two college friends or the grandparents. i personally would have liked a bit more description,but that is my preference.
03/01/11
Good story. They had to make their own entertainment back in the early 1900's. A bit more proofreading might help, and descriptions of the characters. Thank you.
05/19/11
Enjoyed your article. I've been writing about my life in the 40's and 50's. Things have changed.