The Official Writing Challenge
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What a tender, gentle inspirational story of a very old Bible and how it impacted so many lives. I enjoyed this very much. Thank you and God bless.
02/25/11
aww i loved this one :-) a winner here i think, lovely story well on theme and tenderly told
I loved the last line; you tied it together so nicely. Good story.
02/26/11
I love family tradition and you wove it so nicely in your story! God bless!
03/01/11
What a beautiful and sweet story. I loved the dialogue between mother and daughter. I love how the topic is woven throughout the story.

03/02/11
The last line was wonderful! It think it fit Mia perfectly and I loved the detail that it was an old Bible that she was taking with her. A sweet story!
03/02/11
Lovely portrayal of what matters most in a marriage—the promises of God who is faithful and never changes.