The Official Writing Challenge
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10/10/05
A very "Ecclesisatical"
-is that a word?- reminder that there is nothing new under the sun. Even trial and hardship have been weatehred and triumphed over. The flowers remember what man forgets within his pain and suffering.
Nicely written. Good rhythm and expression.
I liked this poem very much. Loved the pace. A great image of disaster and renewal. I look forward to more.
10/11/05
I enjoyed reading your poem. it had a lovely rhythm. I liked the hope of a new beginning that you expressed.