The Official Writing Challenge
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Excellent in my eyes...Inspiring...
10/11/05
You made the intangible tangible. What a neat piece to praise our Lord.
10/11/05
Truly God is sweeter than honey and smells more divine than any flower. This is a beautiful poem!
10/13/05
The third verse with five lines seemed out of balance with the other verses. I liked the poem though.
This is a lovely devotional poem, but the 3 & 5th verses did throw the balance of it a little. But very inspiring; God bless.