The Official Writing Challenge
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Delightful read! So "true to life." Great Scripture reference.
I'm not a good judge of poetry but this seems quite clever to me.
Wonderfully done! I love the progression of the story, the rhythm and flow is fabulous and I enjoyed it very much!
I love how the God reminds him throughout the days of the verse he read on Sunday, and that he tries to follow it no matter what. The meter could be a little tighter, but I truly enjoyed what you had to say through your poetry.
This really was clever. Isn't it amazing how we can get so fired up and try so hard, only to blow it? Bu5 then to recoop - what a sweet victory! I loved the happy ending.
Excellent - a great poem with a great lesson.
I really liked this modern fairy tale- like rhyme.You did a great job with this. It was a pleasure to read.
What an amazing read. Your poem flowed like a mighty river. Great job. Keep writing.
loved the imagery presented with excellent meter and flow.
You did very well and I loved the read.
Congratulations for placing 8th in level 2.