The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a thrilling retelling. I can picture the scenery and almost smell the smells. Nice job.
Gripping imagery. Well told story.
Excellent idea and one could feel that you were there.
You bought this story to life. If you closed your eyes you could just about touch the reality of your story. Will it be just as gruesome this time around for Gods children? Good job and very well written.
Your story is truly thrilling. There were times when the flowery language overcame the story for me, and I had to step back and reread. There is a very delicate balance between creating a voice and controlling it so modern audiences can easily follow. Keep writing - this was well done.
Definitely brought me to the edge of my seat with the ending. Congratulations!