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02/10/11
Great job on your free form piece. I especially love the last two lines. Great analogy overall.
02/11/11
A beautifully written, poignant poem.
02/12/11
I love the title and the analogy is perfect. It's definitely a new way of thinking about things for me.
02/13/11
Lovely piece of free verse.
Enjoyed my "thyme" in the kitchen with God.
Lovely ideas and imagery in your poem.
Good meter and flow.
02/13/11
I loved your free flow poem. It covered all the different eras. I loved the end. No going back.
02/15/11
i love the title in the kitchen with God and this one would have fitted equally well (if not better) into the Seasons theme of a few weeks ago the play on seasons/seasoning
would have been perfect.
some lovely word pictures heard and sights sounds and smells
02/17/11
I enjoyed reading this. I especially loved the lines:

Seasons have a shelf life
like thyme in a bottle, they lose their flavor
when they hang around too long

SO true. Thanks. And congratulations! :)