The Official Writing Challenge
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Great job on your free form piece. I especially love the last two lines. Great analogy overall.
A beautifully written, poignant poem.
I love the title and the analogy is perfect. It's definitely a new way of thinking about things for me.
Lovely piece of free verse.
Enjoyed my "thyme" in the kitchen with God.
Lovely ideas and imagery in your poem.
Good meter and flow.
I loved your free flow poem. It covered all the different eras. I loved the end. No going back.
i love the title in the kitchen with God and this one would have fitted equally well (if not better) into the Seasons theme of a few weeks ago the play on seasons/seasoning
would have been perfect.
some lovely word pictures heard and sights sounds and smells
I enjoyed reading this. I especially loved the lines:

Seasons have a shelf life
like thyme in a bottle, they lose their flavor
when they hang around too long

SO true. Thanks. And congratulations! :)