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I used to think it would be romantic to live during the pioneer days too. But if I had I would've died in childbirth so I agree with the MC when she awakened from her dream. Nice writing!
It is fun to let our minds wander and wonder what it would be like to live in another time. I remember watching "Little House" when I was a kid thinking it would be a romantic era.
02/12/11
We don't think about heavy petticoats,exhaustion and pain when thinking about the romance of that time. Thanks for a detailed peak into the reality of that era. I think I'll stay here.
well done on this story of yours. What a life the early settlers and pioneers lived. Thankfully we are no longer in their shoes.
Lovely read. Well done
I loved this story. Seeing movies about traveling by wagon train across the desert seems so romantic but you showed how difficult it truly was. Good job.
02/15/11
this was funny and descriptive well done. and i thought that "mail order brides" were a phenomenum of the modern era. how wrong i was!