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02/12/11
I used to think it would be romantic to live during the pioneer days too. But if I had I would've died in childbirth so I agree with the MC when she awakened from her dream. Nice writing!
02/12/11
It is fun to let our minds wander and wonder what it would be like to live in another time. I remember watching "Little House" when I was a kid thinking it would be a romantic era.
02/12/11
We don't think about heavy petticoats,exhaustion and pain when thinking about the romance of that time. Thanks for a detailed peak into the reality of that era. I think I'll stay here.
02/13/11
well done on this story of yours. What a life the early settlers and pioneers lived. Thankfully we are no longer in their shoes.
Lovely read. Well done
02/13/11
I loved this story. Seeing movies about traveling by wagon train across the desert seems so romantic but you showed how difficult it truly was. Good job.
02/15/11
this was funny and descriptive well done. and i thought that "mail order brides" were a phenomenum of the modern era. how wrong i was!