The Official Writing Challenge
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02/03/11
Very interesting story about a touching subject. Nicely done. Thanks for sharing.
You did such a wonderful job of capturing the emotions, fears and hopes of all of the characters. I felt my heart thumping right with them.
Such a tender loving story about meeting the birth mother and how it impacted so many lives. I enjoyed how you made all the emotions so real. Good job and keep writing.
02/06/11
a touching and poignant story i love the way you intertwine the stories as the moment draws near to when the two meet. you also manage to develop the characters and the emotions of all the different characters in the story.
great writing. i think the judges are going to be hard pushed to chose the winners this week as there is such a variety of great writing.your included :-)
Congratulations for placing 10th in level two!
02/10/11
Thanks so very much for the comments. I am learning from all of you! I also appreciate the critiques...it helps me learn! God bless!