The Official Writing Challenge
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02/04/11
This is a nice message, I liked how your MC noticed the changing world, but still appreciated that some things never change.
02/05/11
I loved how your MC pointed out how the world changed since she was young, and I love how she heard the voice of God and immediately felt His peace.
02/06/11
lovely descriptive writing and i liked the idea of the changing world and the foundational truths of Gods unchanging love. :-)
02/08/11
An enjoyable read with beautiful word pictures and devotional thoughts.