The Official Writing Challenge
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02/03/11
Some interesting thoughts you put out in this entry. Nice use of words and good reasoning in your final paragraph. Thanks for sharing.
Some insightful thoughts here.

I found the references distracting to the story. Maybe if you asterisks them at the botttom it would help.

I like how you said about when choices are not going well, questioning if it was God's Will. I so do that!

I like the idea about stopping and really thinking about that extra hour for DST, I'm sure many can relate to the wondering what if. Nice take on the topic.
I loved your take on the challenge. You made so many valid points about time. I enjoyed this very much. Thank you.
Congratulations for placing 6th in level two!