The Official Writing Challenge
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Loved this. Absolutely loved this story. He is faithful and He is never changing. Thank you for a very lovely story.
01/27/11
Wow, what a realistic story for mom's of grown children. It touched my heart and made me so thankful for the three children I brought into this world. Thanks for a lovely piece of writing with a tender message.
01/30/11
With a daughter of my own, this hit home. I can't help but be reminded of the Scripture about training up a child. There's nothing like hearing God whisper: "You did good." Perhaps that's what He's saying to you, here. Enjoyed your writing.
02/01/11
wonderful! little snapshots that each told a important stage in the life and relationship between mum and daughter. I was enthralled. I hope it gets in the winners board. You deserve it with this enchanting happy/sad precious story
02/01/11
I enjoyed the sweet and tender segments that made up this story. The title drew me in and I'm glad for that. Nicely done.
02/01/11
I'm always a sap for mother-daughter stories and this was a wonderful one. Thanks!
What a great tribute to mother-daughter relationships. There's nothing like it. Congratulations for placing 7th in level 2!