The Official Writing Challenge
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I liked how God and the sinner had a conversation and God showed the sinner what He wanted from him/her. The title as perfect for the way your article was written. Good job.
01/27/11
I had mine annual review recently and He said pretty much the same things to me that you wrote in the piece. Creative and original. Thanks for sharing.
01/30/11
Kind of a slap in the old face, huh? Been there- HE has a way of doing that. Thanks for sharing.
02/01/11
i laughed at this. A serious message told in a original (well fairly original ) way. I loved the line about Are you going to fire me... yes.... that made me go HUH ! :-)
02/01/11
What a delightful piece. I just loved it!
02/03/11
well done a well deserved placing ....
02/05/11
Excellent! I loved the format and the title. Being a retired manager I an really relate. I too got a chuckle here and there. I hope we all get fired!
02/08/11
I really enjoyed reading this. Some excellent and thought provoking points woven in. :)