The Official Writing Challenge
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01/22/11
Wow! Nice "seasoning"-- nice word painting, but it nearly flew over my head. Upon closer examination, I appreciated the beautiful brush strokes, use of "word color" and the story presented. Nicely painted.
01/23/11
Wow! i like this. i thought from the titile that you were going to talk about herbs and spices so the universe and planets was an unexpected delight
01/23/11
Creative use of the idea of seasoning & an interesting sprinkling of scientific terms. A couple of misspellings are "expanse" & "to and fro."
This felt like it could have been a poem. The words you used were powerful, but the format didn't do them justice. Keep writing and trying different styles and genres. I can feel your passion.
This is beautiful with lots of imagery. It would show so much better if you'd write it in lines of free verse, for it truly is poetic.
I enjoyed this. Beautifully described; it's exactly how I see creation. Well done.
01/27/11
good on you to get the highly commended.high praise for this little gem :-)
01/29/11
I agree with Shann and Verna. As I was reading, I pictured it as free verse.
Your word picture begs to be written as poetry. Great job.