The Official Writing Challenge
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01/22/11
I like this! Very imaginative! Indian summer is a bit of a reprieve from the reality of what's coming, isn't it. Nicely done
01/22/11
i loved the title it was very clever and the writing itself was very funny descriptive and a bit wacky, i loved the whistle stop tour around the world :-)
the only bit i did not think lived up to the rest was the ending.it seemed to fall a bit flat.
i hope it gets a place on the winners board because it is so different as well as being great writing
Your story shows there is no place like home. I was sure you were visiting all of these wonderful places via the library or some books. You surprised me in the end by being on a plane headed for home.
This is wonderful. I would pay good money to learn how to be so fascinatingly scattered. It takes a real confidence to write like this. I hope it makes it to the top ten so more people will notice and enjoy it.