The Official Writing Challenge
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01/22/11
A beautifully written poem with a great message. I would have sent it to everyone i know if i had read it right after thanksgiving. Its full of so much food for thought. The spirit was surely moving in you to write this!
01/22/11
This is a very nice poem and flows well. Nice job.
01/23/11
Thanks for sharing your Christmas porm. It is lovely. I could smell the cinnamon. It was easy to read and nicely written.
01/23/11
You have a lovely Christmas/New Year's seasonal message. It would be perfect to send out as part of your Christmas letter message. One of my favorite lines is "Cinnamon spice and cranberry jelly" for obvious reasons… I can almost smell and taste this as I read it.
This is a bittersweet message that we should remember all year long. I really liked how your poem flowed and it definitely tucked on my heartstrings.
01/23/11
There are some true gems of phrasing in here. Looking forward to reading more of your work in the future.
You make excellent points in your poem. I enjoyed the images.