The Official Writing Challenge
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01/21/11
interesting to have a historical
piece of writing. i know little about the American naval history so i dont know how much is fact or fiction but you certainly bring the story to life. I got a bit lost with the final bit...
01/22/11
Myself and my wife, served in the military together. As i read your story, it just grabbed me and did not let me go. If it was a book of 300 pages i would have set here and read it to the end. It is very engaging and vivid. A grand work of art!
You brought the anguish of way to life. I found myself holding my breath for the MC. I liked how you went in a very different direction on this topic. It was refreshing.