The Official Writing Challenge
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10/11/05
Your story was a clever way of conveying a new life, new job etc. I liked the reference to the small flower in the remote place at the end.
10/11/05
I LOVED the Flowers / flowers play on words. Wonderful, creative entry.
I know that feeling well of a disappearing dog, always when you least need it. I can understand you not scalding her, the relief is a comfort in itself. Dogs sure ground us. Good story.
Lovely story! As a dog owner myself I can certainly connect with the situation told so well. Creative use of the flowers theme - well done. God bless.
I loved this---could feel your pain as well as hope at the end....very well written!