The Official Writing Challenge
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01/13/11
wow! all the more lovely for writing it in the present tense...... at first i thought it was going to be Adam and Eve.
How clever to have the dream then the jump to earth and then...... the real thing :-)
must be a winner surely!!
I truly enjoyed this story. Dreams do come true. A gentle tender love story with an ethereal experience. Good job and keep writing.
01/13/11
I love your description of the characters. The eloquence of your words, made them come alive. I enjoyed the way you encorporated the subject into your piece. Very well written.
01/15/11
Thanks for sharing your beautiful love story. It is well written.
01/15/11
As a previous reviewer mentioned, I thought Eve was in view given the superlatives you used in describing her. I suppose though that realistically captures the gloss we give someone when infatuated with them. Nice descriptions & I liked your closing line. :)
I love this romance! (and not just because I have red hair and blue eyes!)You did a great job making the characters seem so real.Congratulations for placing 8th in level two!