The Official Writing Challenge
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A lovely poem; could have or should have been written without capitals though....far more pleasing to the readers eye. Always check for spelling mistakes before submitting, okay!
God bless love from JOHN3-34 Evangelist xxx
I like this very much...The heart speaks well what the spirit feels...
10/11/05
There's a ery sweet lesson about rebirth here. A few hints: this falls below the minimum of 150 words, and the capital letters reslly are difficult for most readers. You do a fine job with rhyme, and with using repetition effectively. Keep writing!
10/11/05
Good grief---I can't type today. The mystery words in that last comment were "very" and "really."
10/13/05
Ditto - the comment about using capital letters, and ditto - the comment about expanding to poem to embrace all the seasons. The minimun word limit and poetry are never easy companions.