The Official Writing Challenge
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12/23/10
Didn't I read somewhere that men are from Mars and women, from Venus? This is such a cute story and leaves the reader wondering what happens next. Great job!
12/23/10
Please disregard the first comment. It was intended for the previous entry.
Your story is so timely and shows how God is always waiting and will use circumstances to draw us back to him. Great writing.
12/23/10
Super story with a great message. Merry Christmas and God bless you as you write for His honor and glory.
How your story sounds like so many people. We never acknowledge God until a crisis hits and then we cry like babies. Woe is me we cry. God is just a prayer away and all we need do is call.
12/25/10
You did a good job of describing the situation Jose found himself in. I tasted a little dirt myself. Thanks for sharing and Merry Christmas.
Great descriptions. Congrats on your placing.
Congratulations on telling a thrilling story.