Home Read What's New Join
My Account Login

Read Our Devotional             2016 Opportunities to be Published             Detailed Navigation

The HOME for Christian writers! The Home for Christian Writers!
The Official Writing Challenge



how it works
submission rules
guidelines for
choosing a level


submit your entry
read current entries
read past entries
challenge winners

Our Daily Devotional HERE
Place it on your site or
receive it daily by email.



how it works   Submit

Previous Challenge Entry (Level 2 – Intermediate)
Topic: Communication Breakdown (12/16/10)

TITLE: Lord, Are You Listening?
By Kathy Stevens


Sitting on a park bench, John is the picture of discouragement. His head is down, shoulders are slumped. He looks like he has lost his best friend. The sun is not shining because of the clouds that have slipped in, but he would not enjoy it if it was. His attention is focused on the loss of his job.

Bills are due, and to top it all off, it seems as if the heavens are brass. The fellowship he has enjoyed with God is pretty non-existent right now.

"Lord, I'm desperate. You've got to talk to me. I really need You and I miss You.

He feels a tap on the shoulder. “Huh?”

“I’m sorry; I didn’t mean to startle you.”

“Oh, it’s all right, Pastor Blake – I am just in a funk since I lost my job.”

“I’m sure you have taken this problem to God, haven’t you?”

“Yes, but it seems my prayers don’t go any higher than the ceiling. What’s wrong, Pastor Blake, why isn’t God hearing me?”

Well, John, we know that God always hears us and He says He will supply our every need.”

John looks intently into Pastor’s face. “Then why . . .”

“John . . . what is the last thing God told you to do?”

“I . . . I . . . don’t know . . . . Well there was a time a couple of weeks ago when I had a strong feeling I should stop by my neighbor’s house and help him with a heavy load he was trying to carry. I could see he was struggling, but I was in such a hurry, I didn’t have time. I was going to try to get back to him, but he already had the job done when I returned.”

“What has happened since then?”

“You know? I don’t think I have heard from God since, not even about my needs. We have been so close, we fellowship and discuss everything. I have missed those talks. What do you think is the problem?”

“John, when there is a breakdown in communication, it is because we have moved – not God. He is always close, looking for every way to bless us. Sometimes, through sin, we miss those blessings.


“Yes, delayed obedience, is the same as disobedience and disobedience is sin. It is the sin of Adam and Eve. Sin separates us from the blessings and favor God has for us. It hurts Him to not be able to give to us the good gifts He has prepared. We should be very careful to not plug up our blessing spout.”

“I never thought of that. But I really intended to get back before he was finished, I just needed to . . . .”

“To do what – what could be more important than obeying God your Father? Do you think He doesn’t know every detail of your life and the reason you did not stop?”

“Well . . . yeah . . . I wanted to meet my buddy in the park for a ballgame.”

“Did you not trust God to know which was more important? God knows your neighbor had been praying and asking for help with his heavy load. He asked you to be a blessing to him, but you had you on your mind. Isn’t that so?”

John buries his face in his hands. “Oh, Lord, I am so sorry I did not obey Your direction. I ask You to forgive me of that sin – and please speak to me again.”

“I never stopped speaking to you, John, but sin has a way of disrupting our communication. Now that the way is clear, I have blessings waiting for you. Be sure to keep our lines of communication open. I have much to say and there is much to do . . . and I miss you too.”

The opinions expressed by authors may not necessarily reflect the opinion of FaithWriters.com.
If you died today, are you absolutely certain that you would go to heaven? You can be right now. CLICK HERE

JOIN US at FaithWriters for Free. Grow as a Writer and Spread the Gospel.

This article has been read 405 times
Member Comments
Member Date
Nancy Sullivan 12/23/10
Your story answers its own question. God is always listening, isn't He? And He sends His response through others and through His word. Great story.
Fern Brown12/23/10
Very good!

Merry Christmas and God bless you in your writing.
James Heath12/23/10
Yes He is always listening. At times I think we all think He may not be. I pray that as the time approaches for Jesus return in this dark generation that we all can shine brighter and brighter and hear His voice through His word. He is always speaking. Good reminder ruunforgiven.com
Mildred Sheldon12/24/10
How often I've said that and like John I messed up.Thank you for a tender but oh so true story. God bless.
Brenda Rice 12/25/10
Good story and a wonderful message that rings true in my life. Merry Christmas.
diana kay12/26/10
it is good that so many people have taken the communication problems between God and man and yet you manage to come out with a lovely well told story about the difficulties.... I just wonder if I had lost my job and my pastor started quoting scripture and spiritual truths at me if I would react in such a open way as your character did :-)
Shann Hall-LochmannVanBennekom 12/30/10
congratulations on your HC. Your story had a great message that so many can understand.