The Official Writing Challenge
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12/23/10
Your use of poetry to tell this story was done so well. The words flow so freely and they effectively bring your message to the reader. Great job.
12/23/10
Grood job, I thought the message was great!
A truly beautiful poem and well written. Right on point.
12/25/10
Your poem flows nicely and has a great message. Thanks for sharing.
12/26/10
an unusual subject for a poem... but it does kinda work :-) almost like a saga... well done
I could feel your pain in this beautiful piece. It really tugged on my heart.
I didn't see this one until today. Great job and congrats on your placing.