The Official Writing Challenge
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12/16/10
This is one of favorites so far. Good conversation between the men. Very realistic. Great message.
A well written story and so very true of how we treat people who cannot understand our language. I love it when God teaches us lessons in humility which he often does because our eyes are wide shut. I enjoyed this story immensely. Keep writing.
12/20/10
Wow - so very powerful. Superbly written.
12/23/10
Congrats on a superb job and 1st place. Love your style!!!
12/23/10
This is so powerful Michael and well deserves first place. It really touched my heart. A strong strong message. Congratulations.
12/23/10
Congratulations on your well-deserved win. I think we all can learn a lot from your writing style. Well done.
Congratulations on first place for a truly superb piece.
Congratulations on your well deserved first place award.
12/23/10
Congratulations on you First Place Editor Choice award! I really enjoyed your writing style!
Wow what a touching story. It reminds me to give thanks for how blessed I am. Congratulations on your EC!
12/23/10
Congratulations! This is a super story and very touching. God bless you as you write for Him.
Wow. What a moving piece.
12/23/10
Michael, the title, the dialogue, the subject - each one of it was apt, proper and touching. Congratulations.
12/25/10
Wow! I was really moved by this. What a powerful short and what a unique perspective. Thanks for sharing it and congrats!
Congrats. I haven't been on Faith in a while and just saw this. Wow. Great job!! I like the way you worked the dialogue and characters. How you showed the change of Lee's heart, after he had found out the truth of the old man was well done. So much truth in this and realistic setting. Thank you for writing this!
06/09/11
I have a lump in my throat.