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12/16/10
Good story!
12/16/10
Your story has a devotional quality that could be used with teens. Not that adults don't need to hear it. Thanks for sharing with us.
What an amazing story. The language of God is so simple to those who know it, but to those who don't it truly is the most foreign language in the world. Not just a good story, but a great story that needs to be shared with all. Thanks and God bless.
12/18/10
it is so true that "to love ones enemies" is a foreign message to the world and a challenge even for Christians. thank you for this well written story illustrating and shedding light this topic
12/21/10
A good devotional study. I agree that teens would benefit from this, as well as adults. The dad seemed like Solomon with his wisdom, advising the son to follow his instruction so that he too could benefit from God's grace.
You did a good job teaching a lesson on forgiveness. I'd like to know a bit more about the characters. Perhaps if you added some details with the dialog that would help me know the characters better and know who is speaking each time. You have a great grasp on dialog. It felt realistic and genuine. You did a great job. Congratulations for placing in the top 7 of your level!