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Loved this story. Great writing and once I started reading I had to continue. Good job and right on point. Keep writing.
This is a touching story. There are so many kids in foster care that need a stable home. I liked how you described the characters. I could feel their pain.
This article is beautiful, and I love the fostering part. Have you ever read the Above Rubies magazine? They have a lot of true testimonies such as this. Perhaps you could send it in to them?
12/14/10
what a great story and so well written right from the start with the frost drive giving echos of the infertility problem. I was confused for a minute about how the foster children were given to the family with just one simple phone call but then i saw that simple word "again", maybe emphasising the fact that the couple had already been foster parents, would save fast readers like myself from losing the flow of the story.
great descriptions life.ns and a lovely ending all ringing very true to life.