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This is a very good article, but next time please put a space between paragraphs. It makes it easier to read and understand. I truly enjoyed your story. Keep writing and God bless.
This was a very interesting read. It showed me how fears and not talking can really have an impact on one's life. I've always been very open and answered my kids questions honestly. I never understood why parents were embarrassed about talking about sex to their kids. I'm glad you shared your story. Now that my kids are grown they've made really good choices and I'm happy for them. I'm also glad you finally got a chance to talk about your thoughts and feelings too. Good writing.
12/14/10
this is a great article and covers so much about the "messages" and their power to influence us. I cant help feeling sad that your dad (or mom)while being so keen to bring messages of hope and salvation to others did not enlighten you in a positive way about Gods great gift of sex :-) but i think this is not an uncommon scenario and one many can relate to. I am sure it is a true story so thank you for sharing it here
i was gripped and drawn into the peice and you managed to cover so much within the word count
12/15/10
Great Story of personal experience. Well written. Keep Writing.