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What a tender story of life with all its ups and downs. Follow the signs hits home. So true that God will never leave you, just follow his leading.
12/09/10
A very touching story. It is heartbreaking that so many people go through such trials, but so comforting to know God leads in the darkest hour.
I really enjoyed this peek into an intimate talk with Jesus. He definitely answers us if we just listen. I also liked how you used the double meaning of the word sign.
12/15/10
I loved your use of the signs to uncover the story gradually. Writing in the present tense was very effective.