The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow! You had my palms sweating by the time I got to the end. Very good descriptions!
Very well written. You held my attention from beginning to end. Your body language came through loud and clear. Good job.
Great descriptions. I know there has to be more to this story. Hope your write it. Blessings.
What an intriguing story! Great take on body language too. The last line did puzzle me about her becoming a socialite. It makes me want to read the next chapter to find out more.
You did a nice job describing the setting and the characters. I wished I could keep reading and find put more about these delightful characters.