The Official Writing Challenge
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12/02/10
Wow! You had my palms sweating by the time I got to the end. Very good descriptions!
Very well written. You held my attention from beginning to end. Your body language came through loud and clear. Good job.
Great descriptions. I know there has to be more to this story. Hope your write it. Blessings.
12/07/10
What an intriguing story! Great take on body language too. The last line did puzzle me about her becoming a socialite. It makes me want to read the next chapter to find out more.
You did a nice job describing the setting and the characters. I wished I could keep reading and find put more about these delightful characters.