The Official Writing Challenge
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12/02/10 sweet!
I'm not a big fan of free verse, but you put in a lot of imagery. I especially liked this stanza:
" With hands outstretched,
She leans into the love.
Like a billowing sheet on wash day
Snapping out to touch the sky--
Blown by a warm wind."
Well done!

What a sweet and lovely tribute to your grandmother.
Great job.
This is a beautiful poem. The body language told the whole story and Grandma McKay filled me with joy. Thank you for sharing such a wonderful poem
what a great word picture..... I love it
I loved the last verse.
This is one of the most interesting descriptions of body language I've read yet.
What a beautiful poem. Congratulations on your second place win!
Congrats on your 2nd place ribbon!
Congratulations on your second place this week.