The Official Writing Challenge
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12/02/10
This is a great story for this topic! I suggest that you show the exact hand gestures and facial expressions of Zacharias to make it more realistic.
Keep writing.
12/02/10
Excellent idea for this topic. I agree with Yvonne - make it more personal, show us some exact moments so we don't feel like we're just reading the Bible story. Good creativity.
12/03/10
The title was perfect for the story that followed. That is one of my favorite Bible stories. Thank you and God bless.
12/07/10
I like your unique take on this topic. The idea of an angel's soft voice causing Zacharias to doubt is something I'd never thought of before. I do agree that more descriptions of bodily gestures would strengthen the piece.
12/07/10
I like your take on the topic. I'm sure there was plenty of body language when Zacharais realized he was dumb.
12/09/10
You did a great job retelling the Bible story and weaving the topic into it. Great job keep writing I really enjoy your work!