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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 2 – Intermediate)
Topic: Body Language (11/25/10)

TITLE: Five steps to germination.
By David Nicoli
11/29/10


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A fool proof guide,
To sow the faith seed.
A higher growth rate,
That youíre sure to need.

Step one, keep quiet,
And donít shout.
Donít tell others to believe,
When you still doubt.

Step two, stock up,
Fill your bag with seed.
Study your Holy Bible,
Thatís what you need.

Step three, act,
Do what the Bible says.
Change your body language,
Like one who obeys.

Step four, wait a bit,
Learn even more.
Donít plant your seed,
Until youíve filled your bag more.

Step five, donít talk,
It needs to be quiet.
If you think it doesnít work,
Maybe you should try it.

There, all done,
Youíve planted a faith seed.
Talk wasnít needed,
Because deed it what you need.

People donít listen,
Especially to us talk.
People sooner watch,
The way Christians walk.

The lost donít hear,
They just donít care.
Theyíd rather watch,
The Christian who dare.

People donít want words,
They want to see.
Why should they believe?
When weíre not clean?

Change your body language,
Change your deed.
Thatís the fool proof guide,
To sow the faith seed.

I hope you can hear,
Godís Holy message.
And the very importance,
Of your body language.


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Yvonne Blake 12/02/10
Good message!
Your rhythm is a bit rough, but I like the strength of the repeated phrases.
Keep writing!
Nancy Sullivan 12/02/10
I enjoyed your poem and its message. In stanza seven, it looks like "Deed IS what you need." (I always see these little things at the moment I hit the submit button.) Great job.
Mildred Sheldon12/03/10
I enjoyed this immensely. Stanza a little rough but the message came through loud and clear. Good job and keep writing. God bless.
Cheryl Harrison 12/05/10
People donít listen,
Especially to us talk.
People sooner watch,
The way Christians walk.


I enjoyed your poem. Great message. Blessings!

Nancy Bucca 12/07/10
This poem carries a fantastic message: Sow the seed, watch the deed. A few more details in regard to body language would have been nice - a hand here, a foot there, although that's not necessary for getting the point across.
Shann Hall-LochmannVanBennekom 12/09/10
Beautiful poem and congratulations for your third place ribbon!
Cheryl Harrison 12/09/10
Congrats on your 3rd place ribbon!
Nancy Sullivan 12/11/10
Just adding my congratulations. Your poetry flows beautifully with its message.