The Official Writing Challenge
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12/02/10
Good message!
Your rhythm is a bit rough, but I like the strength of the repeated phrases.
Keep writing!
12/02/10
I enjoyed your poem and its message. In stanza seven, it looks like "Deed IS what you need." (I always see these little things at the moment I hit the submit button.) Great job.
12/03/10
I enjoyed this immensely. Stanza a little rough but the message came through loud and clear. Good job and keep writing. God bless.
12/05/10
People donít listen,
Especially to us talk.
People sooner watch,
The way Christians walk.


I enjoyed your poem. Great message. Blessings!

12/07/10
This poem carries a fantastic message: Sow the seed, watch the deed. A few more details in regard to body language would have been nice - a hand here, a foot there, although that's not necessary for getting the point across.
12/09/10
Beautiful poem and congratulations for your third place ribbon!
12/09/10
Congrats on your 3rd place ribbon!
12/11/10
Just adding my congratulations. Your poetry flows beautifully with its message.