The Official Writing Challenge
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11/25/10
Lots of life here that's well-drawn, with a great slightly -signposted twist at the close. Good work.
11/26/10
Very cute!
11/26/10
A thoroughly delightful story. I wonder where his random text message ended up?!
11/28/10
Very well done. I enjoyed reading this. Sounded like real life to me.
Thank you for the little imitator. Very enjoyable read. Children learn by observation.
This is a cite story. I think most parents have had that oh no moment when they realize the little one might not be copying our best habits. You did a great job with this one. Great message.
12/02/10
This one reminds me of my 22-month-old grandson who is really into cell phones. Very cute story. Congratulations on placing this week.