The Official Writing Challenge
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I really enjoyed this story. It was well written, and I'm sure that it will have touched many a "Mama"s heart, perhaps even remind the "Mama"s just how important their parents were to them.
You've got a great message here. I felt that your dialogue could do with being broken up a bit more. I can't easily imagine a mother and daughter waiting so patiently for the end of each other's long speech. Conversation is more natural when people are constantly butting in. However, as Verna said, there's some great material here. It's just a case of making good even better.
I like your reminder that mama speaks the truth even when it hurts. Most of the time what I want to hear isn't what I need to hear. Thanks for sharing a very nice story.
It doesn't matter how old you get if you have a mama you can call at any time and talk about anything then you are truly blessed. Of course for those who don't Jesus provides what we need in more ways than one. Great story.
How wonderful to have a Christian mother. I'll give mine an extra hug today. Great story.