The Official Writing Challenge
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11/25/10
Very clever twist.
11/25/10
Having grown up in an age when phones were shared like this, I could identify with it; so well that I never saw the twist coming at the end. Very clever and credible entry.
11/28/10
Very clever twist to listening on the party line. Party Line was my entry's title that didn't get entered. Good job with yours.
Oh how well I remember party lines. Didn't see the end coming but enjoyed the twist immensely.
I love this twist what a way for the birds to find out that Jesus even cares for them. This was a brilliant idea and I hope it does very well!
12/02/10
This turned out to be a very different story than your readers would think. I love the creativity. Great writing.
12/02/10
Oops. Forgot to congratulate you on your second place.
12/02/10
Congratulations on your EC win. Your story was unique,creative, and certainly not just for the birds :-)
12/02/10
Oops! My blooper....Congrats on your 1st place award.
12/02/10
Shall I try again...2nd place win :-(