The Official Writing Challenge
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11/20/10
I loved how you covered the challenge. Some will dismiss the part about Christians being confined in the future but it is possible. Christianity is a threat to one world order. I enjoyed reading this very much.
11/20/10
Fascinating speculative fiction--I enjoyed this very much.

You had a few issues with switching tenses, and I thought the last sentence was a tad abrupt and stilted.

Nevertheless, this was a great commentary and cautionary tale, quite well done.
11/22/10
This is a very interesting story. I believe it may be more real that fiction in the near future. Thanks for sharing your views..
11/25/10
This is a great and powerful message one that I hope many read and understand.
11/25/10
Very captivating story Colin. My first instinct when reading where the children were placed was --perhpas Christians should not have chiildren if that is their future. I struggle with fully trusting God with my kids and their welfare. Your story has allowed this to surface. God has used you and I thank you. I guess now He and I begin the dialogue of trust. Regards P.