The Official Writing Challenge
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11/20/10
Nice to read about such a loving family!

I felt that some of the dialogue and the situations (lunch with all 4 parents, every day?) were somewhat unrealistic. Also, you really should avoid using the same characters (the parents, in this case) from week to week--the judges may start to recognize your work, making it no longer anonymous.

This had a joyous feeling, quite refreshing from the cynical mood we often have about the media.
11/21/10
Delightful read.

I found some of the dialogue a bit stilted. Try reading it aloud and see what you can do to make it sound more natural.

Enjoyed this.
11/22/10
The title fits the article well. The information about behind scene jobs is interesting. I feel the coziness between the in-laws was a bit unrealistic. thanks for writing.
You did a nice job of remembering all the people behind the scenes. It takes so much more than the average person realizes to get the news out.