The Official Writing Challenge
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I loved it especially how Miss D's entire demeanor changed with the gentle closing of the door. The smallest of signals really IS important.
Thank you for a very entertaning and enjoyable story. The only thing you can't eat on a pig is his squeal. That was a standing joke where I grew up. Thanks for the cute reminder.
This is utterly charming! Superb voice.

I thought the first paragraph was perhaps a tad top-heavy, but once the pace picked up, this was a truly delightful read. I loved this!
You created delightful characters and a fun story. Nice job.
Funny, entertaining, very clever title.
Your characters are believable and the tone of your story is very nice. Thanks for sharing with us.
I LOVED this story! I don't know where you got these characters from, but you are a very gifted writer. Well done.
Delightful story! Congrats on your EC win!
What a great story! Your characters were filled to overflowing with life. Great job, and congrats on your EC!
I love your message in this piece. Congrats on your EC!
Congratulations on your excellent placing. Way to go!
This is excellent and filled with charm. Ya gotta love Miss D. Congratulations on your ribbon and Editor's Choice award!
I saw this one as a winner from the start. Congratulations on your 1st Place and your 'promotion'.