The Official Writing Challenge
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11/18/10
I loved it especially how Miss D's entire demeanor changed with the gentle closing of the door. The smallest of signals really IS important.
Thank you for a very entertaning and enjoyable story. The only thing you can't eat on a pig is his squeal. That was a standing joke where I grew up. Thanks for the cute reminder.
11/20/10
This is utterly charming! Superb voice.

I thought the first paragraph was perhaps a tad top-heavy, but once the pace picked up, this was a truly delightful read. I loved this!
You created delightful characters and a fun story. Nice job.
11/21/10
Funny, entertaining, very clever title.
11/22/10
Your characters are believable and the tone of your story is very nice. Thanks for sharing with us.
11/23/10
I LOVED this story! I don't know where you got these characters from, but you are a very gifted writer. Well done.
Delightful story! Congrats on your EC win!
What a great story! Your characters were filled to overflowing with life. Great job, and congrats on your EC!
11/25/10
I love your message in this piece. Congrats on your EC!
Congratulations on your excellent placing. Way to go!
11/25/10
This is excellent and filled with charm. Ya gotta love Miss D. Congratulations on your ribbon and Editor's Choice award!
11/29/10
I saw this one as a winner from the start. Congratulations on your 1st Place and your 'promotion'.