The Official Writing Challenge
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11/19/10
Very inspirational story--thanks for this entry.

I really didn't see the topic prompt (The Media) in this...and it would be easier to follow if the fellow's thoughts were in italics. You have to use HTML code for that; you can read about how to do it in the FAW section of the forums on this site.

Thanks for reminding us about the peril of our soldiers, and to pray for them.
A very beautiful story. War is so ugly, but it can also be beautiful. Thank you for sharing such a tender story.
This is a touching story and the characters are wonderful.
11/22/10
Thanks for reminding us what our service men and women are going thru everyday. Your characters have good voices. I enjoyed reading this.
Being an imbedded reporter during wartime must take nearly as much courage as being a soldier.
I know you only have 750 words, but the conversion seemed a bit rushed, though I have always loved happy endings. :)