The Official Writing Challenge
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This was so interesting and an eye opener. Never thought about how customers could influence change. I enjoyed this very much. I love reading all entries in my group. I learn so much. Thank you for sharing.
11/12/10
I thoroughly enjoyed reading this, particularly the crazy emails that your MC received. Either you have some experience of this or you have a great imagination. You portrayed the increasing burnout very well and I liked the positive ending. My only quibble would be that I didn't think you needed the Bible verse at the very end.
11/12/10
A potent message in this story and I appreciate it and receive it.
It is far too easy for me to stand at a few paces and offer comment to the writer- the sculptor of a story.
I am inclined to say 'sandpaper a word or two away to smooth your flow'.
However no highly acclaimed author has ever been influenced or enhanced by my opinion so there you go!.
Great story.
11/12/10
Good writing to me. I liked the whole concept for your story. It was easy to read and it ended well. Thanks.
This is a great story showing how a little action fair amount of prayer and a big dash of faith can do wonders
11/15/10
This story is a winner all around! The writing was superb and the message was even better. Thank you for reminding us that one person can make a difference.